Rewrite paragraphs

 Today we rewrote our paragraphs.

Today we learned what makes formal and informal writing what key words should or should not be in our writing. 

I’m mixed with the lesson as it takes a while to find the right words to make your writing formal. 

I’m feeling better now I don’t feel sick anymore but I may have symptoms but I hope to fully recover tomorrow Thursday.

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